Feedback from client
- Genre and location fit each other
- The target audience is clear and appropriate however it needs an NRS rating
- The synopsis is clear and well thought out
- Location needs more detail
- In terms of equipment, lighting would be needed when filming at night
- A more realistic timescale is needed, remember to allow time for pre-production
- Budget needs a physical number even if it is just an estimate.
To improve my proposal I will:
- use the NRS scale when talking about my target audience
- talk specifically about where my production will be filmed
- Add 'lighting' to my equipment list
- devise a more realistic timescale
- put a physical number on my budget
